well i think Kosan is exactly they way u want readers to see him, an arrogant leader who'll do anything for family, i guess?! I like how the story is progressing though^^

oh it seems interesting, hope the ladies' fates wont be bad:(

lmao, dude your story's awsome so far! I laughed when it said "Rior would like 'er" that was my favorite part. And I noticed that our gener's for you story and mine are the same! Haha, wicked awsome. Keep up the good work!!