>Way to go, Captain Obvious! “I can see that.” He rolls his eyes. “What about?”
>“You.”

The best lines ever XD A very good, good story.

Sorry, honey, for not writing anything more today, but my brain kinda died ^^;

I thought I would sign in here, albeit anonymously to drop you a semi-coherent review (it'll never be as concise and coherent as you deserve because I've been sliding or spiralling down into some semi-depression, and yes, talk lots and lots of gibberish as a result).

Anyhow, I love your writing style here: it's very visual, playful and reads fluidly. I'm somehow torn between awe and envy because you're a truly skilled writer. Not only because you choose your words so carefully, but because your work is different, original. Of course, your references are love; it conveys a lot of charm to your work.

I like your characterisation of The Muse (I assume he is that?). He's very charming!

Oh, and here my review shall end because I don't have anything else that is relevant to say. Just dropped by to say I read and liked.