the ending felt a little slapdash, but the poem as a whole is very good.

This is pretty interesting, I really like the way you have it formatted and the way you used light and dark, warmth and cold, to really throw your emotions at the reader.
- "I thought we could wait for the fireworks" - "I would let you pick the brightest c o l o r" - "& I thought we could wait for the snow"

Awesome!