A-haha... the ending was funny, you should add it to the actual song... (this song is not about you.)

This so reminds me of my elementary school friend who had a huge crush on a boy named Dylan, as well as half of the class. XD

Um... I recommend removing the reference to "Hey Stephen", the song is similar enough already, and that line is kind of making it seem like you're copying. I know you're not trying to, but that's how it would seem to someone who just heard this song...

Also, you seem to overrate a lot of songs. This seems like a "K" song to me, why did you rate it "T"?