i don't understand biblical allusions.
but this is a beautiful chapter, like every other chapter you write.

love triangles, or love tripods, are confusing things.

Reincarnation is an interesting idea.

Definitely opposites.

i love reading your updates.
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your pillow book is magnificent.

I adore the name Abel.
Don't really know why, though.

Even if your pillowbook is
essentially about your emotions
for these people, I'm glad you
are letting them be known instead
of keeping them locked away inside.

What a wonderful analogy of a
desire for reciprocated affection.

Don't worry about forgetting how
much time has passed since then.
Time moves in its own dimension
according to each individual.

Everyone is always changing;
if they aren't, I think that's
when they're living a rather
unhealthy life.

I love the figurative language
of the last stanza. It is
exquisite.

Oh well good luck with your novel :)
I too could never keep up with journals,
there's just something different about pillowbooks.

Not creepy I think it's kind of sweet. Sometimes you can't help but notice people.

Wonderful metaphor. I love all the examples in the second stanza.

i hope your eve really sees you.

What a beautiful portrait of rain.
I adore your writing style.

Hm, I've never had the pleasure of meeting someone quite like me. Probably because my personality and interests are all over the place.

And though it may feel as if she can see right through you, she more than likely doesn't. At least, that's my experience when it comes to such matters.

I did not know that. But I think you'd be wanting to throw up after consuming such a large amount of chocolate.

If you want a high, best stick to the actual stuff haha xD

the last two lines give a very harsh tone to the piece. but they're very strong, very powerful. it's sad how the weather, and cellular signals, have no regard for humans.