cant wait to read more of your work!

That's good. plz update son X"D

They seem to be getting along.

Woot! Thank you for the update! t They are so cute together (all of them) ^-^

LOL! Abel likes to waver between cooperative and rebellious. Very cool!

Loved the lemon! It was so like Abel to be so impatient and demanding. LOL!

Thanks for telling me ylou like my stories!

I'm loving this one, for sure! Massimo is being very kind and considerate of Abel's situation. It shows he'll make a great hubby!

I love this story, I also love how 9 chapters came in such a short time =P. Keep up the awesome work!

I think you're doing all right. They're aliens, it doesn't have to make a lot of sense.

A quick read through might be in order fix the wrong/missing words. In most cases I could figure out what you meant anyway. But a few chapters ago, Ignacio said "once your womb is fully developed it will not be safe for either Massimo or I to have incourse with you." Did he mean until? or that they both had to sleep with him before it is formed if they want to after? or something else?

Really interesting. Keep up the good work.

I like this story already. They're all so cute and passionate. Really got me interested! Can't wait for more :)

i'm addicted to this story and loving all the updates. i imagine it's too good to be true that you'll keep up the update schedule but i'm enjoying it while it lasts!

Awesome characters!

This is great! Can we have an update?

I read all of the chapters you have up on AFF and I hoped that you had a FP account so that I could keep track of you and your work.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story as you post it and in the meantime I'll just entertain myself with checking out what you already have posted ^_^

Keep up the good work, you're a pretty good writer.

I knew I recognized your name from somewhere! I'm reading your story As Legends Say as well :) Glad you're posting on FP as well, now I'll know when you update!