This is great, I'm greatly sure of that.
It's difficult for lovers to accept that the relationship's going to end but you were not too depressed, instead, you wrote a heartfelt poem that everyone could relate to, regardless of age.
GREAT JOB! :)

I hope you find that light, and something or someone to fill in those holes, and to make your heart sing again. This poem is heartfelt and I feel changed for having read it. Good job