I'm probably way off the mark, but this poem makes me think of the martial arts. Great action.

"Herons arch sinuous necks

Crepe paper swans pirouette, crisp-edged wings

folded neatly – living origami."

This line is simply beautiful, a work of art. The poem as a whole was wonderful, but this line in particular was pure magic. I am just now getting into Haikus, and yours is defiantly one of the best I've read so far. Thanks for sharing and keep up the fantastic work.

Ora Lee