would've of never thought that the wings were gonna be made out of lead.

i thought it was gonna be along the lines of your wings being broken or tattered, and that would be the reason you'd fall.

lead, was just something i wasn't expecting. which is a good thing.

keep up the good work.

i loved the way you typed this, and i loved the dreamy, floaty style of it all. you continue to impress me with your writing, please keep it up! :)

-dp

Wonderful little poem. Love the jumping and falling idea through out. :)

This describes love gone awry perfectly.
And I do believe there is a From First To Last
song with the same title haha

Very nice.