 anterapalet 2009-11-26 . chapter 16He just invited a kid to a house often wisited by the Boogeyman. Ups.
I absolutely love your story. Briliant. |
 kazoua 2009-11-25 . chapter 16Boe is Boogey's age-old rival! They've neen duking it out sine the dark ages! (excuse my pun) Now, because of jamie, they aregoing to haveafightto the death
And im trying to review off an itouch 700 miles away from home. Ill... Leave a better review next time. |
 OO 2009-11-25 . chapter 16 AH. HELLO! BOE IS THE BOOGYMAN!
MUAHAAHHAHA. |
 oo 2009-11-25 . chapter 15 wow. this is crazy.
i cant make up my mind. i like it, i dont. but i think i like it.
lol |
 OO 2009-11-25 . chapter 1 oh. creepy. lol. that dudes a corndog! |
 the grimm cow orker 2009-11-25 . chapter 16This chapter would not show up for me for like twenty minutes! ;__;
Sucky Thursday? Teatime. Your best friend is an alien? Teatime. Your house is being destroyed? Teatime. Your planet has been exploded? Teatime. XD
Boe/Boogeyman/Jamie threesome? P: Uhurrhurrhurrhurr.
"“Jamie, I need a favour.”
I slowly nod. “Okay… What is it?”" missed a linebreak there.
BOE IS A SUPER CREEP, SUPER CREEP, HE'S SUPER CREEPY~
...ahaha... =/=;
*sneeze* |
 Allanasha Ke Kiri 2009-11-25 . chapter 16*snuggles Jamie* aw~ poor guy. And he's so confused right now *cackles evilly* |
 Raiya-shi 2009-11-25 . chapter 16HE NEVER TOLD BOE! How does Boe know? =O Second stalker? Perceptive? Boogieman in disguise? .> Boogieman will be a while to appear won't he? D= this is for NaNoWriMo so you have 5 days to finish correct?? x.x intense I wish you luck |
 FlorVerde 2009-11-25 . chapter 16*snickers* finally Jamie's sense of self preservation is kicking in! Or... not. lol he seems like he's just feeling guilty about not knowing anything about his boyfriend (and having cheated on him through awesome tentacle, shadow sex, with ridges) but not so worried about the fact that said boyfriend knows he likes Vivaldi even though he never told him. Jamie, Jamie, Jamie... what am I going to do with you? lol
Some part of me is still holding onto to the idea that Boe may just be the Boogeyman. Maybe. I hope. Like that it's not cheating and it's not dangerous for Jamie to be so oblivious...
Thanks for the update!! |
 Potatoe1988 2009-11-25 . chapter 16Is it weird that I wondered whether the Boogeyman had black semen before you mentioned it?
I hope the Boogeyman doesn't skin the little girl while she's over with Jamie. That would be unpleasant. |
 Sundown 2009-11-25 . chapter 16Is it wierd that I wasn't bothered by the fact that Jamie 'cheated' on Boe...although I don't know the protocols with Boogeyman sex and cheating...if supernatural sex is actually cheating. I liked that Leon and Chris made an appearance in this chapter also...they're good characters. Awesome work, you. Xx |
 Beatles fan 2009-11-25 . chapter 15 Eh, I still can't shake the inuition that Boe is some shapeshifted form of Boogey. I'll be sorely dissapointed when I'm wrong, but for now it can serve as some justification that Jamie isn't really cheating. |
 Sundown 2009-11-25 . chapter 15Oh wow! Now it's almost sounding like a demented form of Stockholm Syndrome...Jamie enjoys the Boogiemans presence! Ah! And I'm still up in the air about Boe...there's just something not right about him...although he serves a nice distraction for Jamie... :)
I like how Boe is almost, asking Chris for advice on how to behave politely or on etiquette such as:
“Chris said you’re supposed to bring a gift with you when you’re going to someone’s place for dinner.”
That part really made me go 'aww' and it expressed an interesting aspect to Chris & Boe's characters and shed light on the kind of friendship dynamic they may have together. Yay!
The cat chapter was very cute too. I know everything in this story serves a purpose and I can't wait to see it all unfold. Great writing, funny, as usual. Bravo. Looking forward to the next installment!Xx |
 piriperi 2009-11-25 . chapter 15Well I knew Jaime would be sleeping with the Boogeyman eventually, I just had no clue how it would work. This chapter answered any questions I had on that though lol. I feel bad that he's betraying Boe a little, but hey at least the guy got some action for once! |
 Yes I Write. 2009-11-25 . chapter 15M... is it strange that the only thing that creeped me out about this was that i'm watching Silence of the lambs so oogie had Hannibal Lecters voice?
And i dislike Jamie for betraying my Boe. |