What I've done

You were everything to me.
You were my dream, my world.
You made me feel when I felt alone.
You made me love when I lost all hope.

I was so happy being with you.
Every second we spent made my heart beat.
But I felt something diffrent after awhile.
I could tell how much pain you were in and It's why I asked.
I was sad because I didnt understand.
But even though you didnt feel the same way and lied,
I never looked at you differently.
You could've hated me like the fist of an angry god,
But id still love you more then ever.
Because I dont care.
I loved being with you.
I love you because you are you.
I dont think anything you do could really change it.
It's not what you do for me.
It would have been nice though...
But, I wasn't sad because of you or what you did.
I was sad because your gone.
You didnt talk like we use to before I asked you out.
It was my fault.
Now im only sad because,
I lost someone very dear to me.

I should have never asked.
I should have left It like we were.
I dont know why I said it so suddenly.
I was happy were we were.
And suddenly I messed It up for both of us.
I really have no regret for what you did.
I got to spend time with a good friend.
I would never have what we've done any other way.
I dont care about it anymore either.
I tried to explain It but failed horribly.
And now, your hidden.
Lost in the realm we call the internet.
Blocked off from eachother.
I was sorry for saying sorry so much.
I felt bad for being annoying.
I was only trying to explain.
But I have no need to apologize anymore.
Right when i was regained consciousness,
It was to late.
I just want to be your friend and talk to you again,
But Im scared of being forgoten.
For what you think of me, this, and what I've done.
Please...

I need help with the pwnest clan ever.

This poem speaks strong words. In the context of life, this poem is about a breakup after honestly confessing one's unattraction and embarking away from a previously admired one. By leaving that individual in the past, Kaineswonderland is able to look back and impressively evaluate her feelings and comb through, sorting what should have been done and what shouldnt have been done. This poem speaks to all those who have been in the same position.
Although the syntax and tone of the poem speaks loudly, the overall structure is rather repetitive and personally I was a little bored. But besides that, it it a good poem

omgg so intence O_O didnt kknow u had it in u XD

wow, i could really feel the anger and the bitterness in this poem.. it was as if you were really screaming the questions at me >_<

always keep writing!
~tiara♥