| Reviews for Then, You Know, Bam |
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DreamingEternal 12/6/09 . chapter 1I like the way the phrases you use in this poem make it sound very casual, like dialogue. Except that we just put on a play in our school called Noises Off, where the main character says "you know" way too many times, and i kept hearing his voice as i read your poem, which kind of ruined the effect. But your title is very meaningful for something that doesnt look like it should make a lot of sense. I like your use of repetition, particularly within the second stanza. (i.e. the word "think") |
Aeroga 11/10/09 . chapter 1That was pretty funny... I don't know if it was supposed to be, but oh well. Nice job! |