|Reviews for Then, You Know, Bam|
| DreamingEternal 12/6/09 . chapter 1
I like the way the phrases you use in this poem make it sound very casual, like dialogue.
Except that we just put on a play in our school called Noises Off, where the main character says "you know" way too many times, and i kept hearing his voice as i read your poem, which kind of ruined the effect.
But your title is very meaningful for something that doesnt look like it should make a lot of sense.
I like your use of repetition, particularly within the second stanza. (i.e. the word "think")
| Aeroga 11/10/09 . chapter 1
That was pretty funny... I don't know if it was supposed to be, but oh well.