Wow just finished it :) I kinda wished that the epilogue was a bit longer but all in all I really enjoyed your story! :) please continue to write 3

I really enjoy your story :)
It definitely deserves a bajillion more reviews then it has right now! Macy & Blair are so good for each other & I hope he opens up to her soon! SWOON WHAT A HERO 33

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Great story! The ending literally had me bawling me eyes out it was so tragic.

Hiya!

Not too shabby. The grammar isn't flash in a lot of places, but I liked how real Blair's pain was. So many stories have people being depressed about being cheated on or something, and while that isn't a nice thing to happen, your story was more realistic.

Mish xx

Sorry for just reviewing at the end, but I read the whole story in just a day, it was a really sweet story, I didn't want Amy to die, but it was a really beautiful story overall. Thanks so much for sharing it!

Beautiful story. I loved it. I'm really grateful for it. I started reading hours ago, it's now half past 4 am.

It's a bittersweet ending, with Amy dying, it was kind of sudden.

On to constructive opinions... where there hints of Amy being sick? If there were, I didn't notice them. They wouldn't need to be to big, they could mean nothing during the story, but it would be nice to look back after learning about her disease and thinking, oh, that's right... to get some sense of understanding.

That's mostly it.

I loved it, again, thank you.

wonderful, again!

wonderful chapter!

i love it!

mira

hey!

i really like your story!

the characters are so special.. blair is so interesting and witty :)

i like macy 'cause she thinks for herself.. but she is a bit too perfect!

mira

This was . . . amazing. Heart wrenching. Perfect. I love it! Definitly on eof thest ive read on fictionpress in a while :D GREAT job!

CrazyCowgirl

I just want to let you know that this is the best story I've read on here so far. I'm pretty much going through this exact situation, and seeing how things turned out between Blair and Macy really gives me hope. The theme and tone of this story was perfect, and the plot even more so. Although there was some grammatical errors, that can easily be fixed. But I don't think you should change anything else because it's great the way it is. I loved the surprise ending, and how it tied everything together.

Overall, I am confident that you will be able to get this story published. And when that happens, you'll be sure to know that I am definitely buying it :)

I hope this gets published! It'll do so well. :) Good luck!

Oh wow. This made me cry a little bit.

Yay, she saved him! What a great ending. Poor Amy, I never would have guessed :( I loved this story :)