Would be quite interesting to read more of this and see what can further develop between these two characters

Very well written, and I like the setting quite a lot. Especially the bits about unicorns. Mr. Hauvae is an intriguing character, and seems to have a lot of potential for making a longer story interesting. Bryan I didn't much care about.
My only complaint is that some warning about the - well, rape - would have been nice.

Haha, I really wasn't convinced by Bryan's pleads at the end of the story. It all seemed very fake to me.

This universe is certainly something. I was wondering if they would do it without, ah, lube-maybe the faerie is into pain/power exchange-but then I was relieved when he at least used it.

Gotta say, I was impressed. Combining all the themes together in an understandable and entertaining manor takes a lot of skill. I really liked this.

I hope you decide to continue this story, because I would love to see where this could go.

Aw man this was awesome. I really liked it )

Very interesting universe... you did a great job fitting all the extras into one coherent and realistic (as much as fantasy can be) tale.

please make this into a story if at all possible, i really want to see what happens! but hopefully it wont end up in a threesome like Broken Wings did XD

That was a great and original fic. I really do hope you continue it soon.

Very hot, but shit poor...Bryan...but none-the-less sickly sweet

Is there going to be more or is this story going to be a book?

O I adore your style of writing! I saw this and thought I would give it a read though I don't like westerns. You have changed it with this wonderful mix with fantasy. The sex scene was lovely, though I expected nothing less! Brilliantly written!

Desert

I liked this story but my one complaint is that it was too short. There is some real potential for a novella here.

Awesome piece, of course. Expected nothing less. It'd be nice if you could find the time to expand this :)

Waiting not-so-patiently,

Caisele

When I first started I thought it was one of those typical modern cliche' stories. I admit I'm a bit slow. Having already read so much of your work, I should have known instantaneously it was going to be nothing of the sort and as awesome as anything else. Its been a while since I read any of your work-aside from some re-reading of BW. And as always the fantasy world you have created continues to intrigue me to no end. Hope to see more of your work soon!