I LOVED IT LOVED IT! I hope you can finish soon! I was practically whimpering bcuz there wasn't another chapter! AHH! I loved it!

I like it and so the name of the chapter is supposed to be the narrator right? Cuz I got confused on the last chapter.

Good chapter. The way you space the paragraphs make it so easy to read. Something about the first line, '... fear was blatant on her face.' Blatant is more like shameless, as in a blatant liar. Maybe you could replace blatant with apparent.

cute chapter :)

Good chapter. I was a little confused in the first one or two paragraphs because I thought it was Freya's dream. Maybe you can make it a little bit clearer that it is William's dream.

Interesting story. Hm... unicorns and werewolves? That's a new combination. Your grammar is good but sometimes your choice of words isn't completely correct. Good story.

The story is awesome so far! It's nice to have another creature besides a were animals in a story. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Greatly written chapter. You can really feel Fyria confusion .

Great chapter _

Can't wait to read more! I like it. It's a good story so far.

I wasn't expecting the change of view. Still good though.

sounds like a good story.