|Reviews for BLANCH FINICKYMINT VS THE DIRTY JAIL CELL|
| eaststar 2/21/10 . chapter 1
I emphasize with Blanchy!
| TymCon 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Lol funny. For a few seconds i was looking for it to ryme at the end of eache seperate line, so it was a bit hard to get into it. It has nice ryhtim but only really gets into its flow towards the end. Good one. Sorry for short review, im horrible at reviewing poetry:P
| S. M. Saves 12/29/09 . chapter 1
Oh my. What did I just read? It was so incredibly silly and so funny! It was also fun to read.
There were a few spelling errors but I believe one of your reviewers nabbed them except maybe for "tortchered" which should be "tortured".
Thanks for the enjoyable read!
| xXhootsXx 12/29/09 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh! Blanch is back! I like Regina Sue! She got even with Blanch Finickymint..that clean lady! (:
| zombie chickens 12/29/09 . chapter 1
I'm glad I decided to look at your other stuff. I love this! It's so maniacal and crazy and..clean-y? Blanch reminds me of my aunt (She scares me) and I guess with my crooked sense of humor I love the fact that she's in jail for smacking a kid and what does she decide to do? Clean! Truely great poetry.
| Classy Broad 11/26/09 . chapter 1
hahah! I really love Blanch! I Love it! I love it! Some Spelling errors nothin' much aside from that you made another excellent poem... Love how you put this in the genre humor/crime! So Can you make one about Little Old Regina Sue? Love that little brat!
| Agent.Frappuccino 11/14/09 . chapter 1
Just to let you know, for the first one about Blach- you should be "to be continued" instead of "Fin" because this is a continuation of the story. (just a thought :P)
She was just a simple lady minding her own business, and this is what happens to her? Regina Sue... she deserved that smack lol. I liked how she went insane though- her desperation to clean was very humerous and sad. Funny in a way because she's this lady going mad, and sad because real people out there suffer from this disorder- and it's not their fault because they can't help it. I don't think she should be kept in a white padded room though, but since it's just a story then why not lol.
Here are a few things you can tweak:
They finally got her in handcuffs; bu [IT SHOULD BE "BUT"] then she began scrubbing with her feet.
"...wnad [AND] while in her jail cell, she crossed the insanity border."
Poor Finickymint :o!
-P.S- I reviewed you twice, does that mean I get two reviews in return? Muha