|Reviews for First Crushes Never Die|
| theKnobblyKneedWriter 2/22/12 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT
| SwimmingThroughExistance 1/4/12 . chapter 1
brilliant:) i really liked it!
| Nothing But A Dreamer 1/2/12 . chapter 1
It was so cute! You could have made it longer but yeah, the major things happened already...I was thinking that if this was the Kennedy of Texas whom Delaney met. I figured out that she was different. Thank you for writing this. :)
| nothinglasts 9/25/11 . chapter 1
I think someone plagiarized this...
| stranger 9/25/11 . chapter 1
Just wanted to say that I love this story, it's so cute (:
Also, someone called "CuteBraniac" plagiarized this story. It's not exactly word-for-word, but it's incredibly similar.
Here's the link if you want to check it out. s/2955537/1/End_Of_It
| Rosedreamer101 9/11/11 . chapter 1
AWW funny. i rememeber review to this already, :D all well 3 so cute, i love it !
| Im Just Mlssundaztood 4/29/11 . chapter 1
Way better than the original. I mean I loved what you wrote the first time but you added so much more backround information and details that made it even more fluffy and realistic :)
Im Just Mlssundaztood
| Meme 4/24/11 . chapter 1
I loved this! You're a really good writer. I just wish that you would have made it full length. All the major stuff is here already, you just have to fill it in.
| chewychester 4/24/11 . chapter 1
GReat chapter. I held my breath the whole time!
| reindrops 3/5/11 . chapter 1
One word: Sexy. ;p
| Alanisaur 7/27/10 . chapter 1
Awe. How cute.
| dail-of-the-air 5/16/10 . chapter 1
It's so cheesy, and yet it's actually a decent oneshot ...
You've got some problems with wording where you use words that kinda-sorta make sense or sound like words that will make sense. And quite a few typos.
A great job glossing over the sex ... it would have killed it if you were to go into gory details.
Overall, good characterization! I would love to see more of their history as friends, though. If you were to turn this into a story, starting with a bunch of drabble-y parts from their childhood, all put together into one prologue you'd have a very perfect beginning.
| x Farii 5/7/10 . chapter 1
| Damned to heaven 2/19/10 . chapter 1
I hope the parents agree
| Anna 1/25/10 . chapter 1
Very cute! I wish this could've been longer though. The idea of making it into a story would actually be very nice! :)