Are u talking about Gaspard Ulliel the French actor who also has a dimple-ish scar on his cheek? Because that is freaking awesome otherwise

Powerful and beautiful as always. :-)

I like the ambiguity here, what's the current suppose to symbolize, and why is it fighting with the man? Who is the man, and does he deserve the scar? Or is he being hit with some sort of realization that has shaped him somehow. Awesome!

Sounds like a certain Gaspard Ulliel. xD

I liked it, very short, I have no idea why you wrote it but you know, I like Gaspard Ulliel and I'm hoping it is about him. (: There really is nothing to improve on. :P

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Lovely poem and imagery. :)

Powerful.

I don't particularly like the use of a semicolon in the middle of the second line, but that's honestly nothing. This is an exceptional haiku.

This is so interesting and unique. I love it :)

A very strong haiku of an even stronger image. :)

That's really good.

Wow, powerful. I'm at a loss for words. I can relate because I have a noticeable scar on my left cheekbone lol. Please keep writing!

Anna _

Well worded, great image, great title

This is amazing. The best haiku I've read from you. Amazing stuff.