|Reviews for Vengeance is not Jewish|
| Brenda Agaro 3/1/10 . chapter 1
I like the word choice and concept. Great job. Very beautiful and intriguing.
| a silenced revolution 1/22/10 . chapter 1
Another thought-provoking poem.
I like the line "You and I are beyond religion, but not this"
I did think that the disparity between the length of the lines made it flow not all that smoothly.
Anyway, interesting work as always.
| romanticrazzy 12/10/09 . chapter 1
I like it, especially the last line
| no.peace.los.angeles 11/27/09 . chapter 1
Very skilled work here, dear. :) Fabulous title, as well. Love it. Keep writing! :)
| Isca 11/15/09 . chapter 1
"He calls me bird." This was my favourite line from the piece. There's just something about this piece, though, that I didn't connect with, but that may just be me, so no worries. Keep writing. :)
| amavian 11/13/09 . chapter 1
Not the best of your pantoums but still a nice creation. You blend religion and love nicely, as always.