I like the word choice and concept. Great job. Very beautiful and intriguing.

Another thought-provoking poem.

I like the line "You and I are beyond religion, but not this"

I did think that the disparity between the length of the lines made it flow not all that smoothly.

Anyway, interesting work as always.

I like it, especially the last line

Very skilled work here, dear. :) Fabulous title, as well. Love it. Keep writing! :)

"He calls me bird." This was my favourite line from the piece. There's just something about this piece, though, that I didn't connect with, but that may just be me, so no worries. Keep writing. :)

Not the best of your pantoums but still a nice creation. You blend religion and love nicely, as always.