This was great. I was able to picture the whole thing in my head. I loved it it was amazing great job.

Wow...creepily awesome..

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Wow. Just... Wow. You have really great characterization. I feel like I really got to look into these character's heads, which isn't something you often come by. I could even picture the bus! Good work.

Hey hon!

This is a very good story. It is awesome. The suspense was so intense I almost thought to get straight to the end, but still I want to know what happens before the end. This is horrifying I would say. And yeah, I would agree with your SWS, weird bus is not going into my list. After reading this, i don't think I want to ride in a bus anymore, yikes!

Great great job! I love it!

Holy shit!

That was awesome!

That was amazing. I wish I could write things like that. Great job!

Awesome! This was way cool! And very tight, you keep it together the whole way. First we feel sorry for him, then we understand what he did, then there is Hell to pay. Good story!