i love the wording in this, especially the last two. (:

a typewriter would actually be amazing. XD

xx

I love this.

I love the word splay in the second line!

This is amazing.

I had a typewriter once, it was awesome.

I like the sound they make when you type.

:)

Really interesting! I have my opinion on what it is saying but i know it is different than the next.

I would like a typewriter too, sigh.

This is nice. The last line in particular is really lovely. Love it. Keep writing! :)

Love the sound of typewriters :) You should write a poem about one!

i like the idea of something so heavy and intense that it can't be carried simply on one person's shoulders.

you always come up with the most interesting pieces.

and i imagine a typewriter would be very romantic. the image of a struggling writer typing away late at night under a dim yellow bulb is one whose appeal you can't deny. but i imagine it'd be a lot more inconvenient than a laptop. haha.

just a thought.

Wonderful!

Love the lines in this. :)