|Reviews for irreversible|
| cab fed hig 1/17/11 . chapter 1
tragic and full of angst. love it
| thursdays and rain 11/24/09 . chapter 1
the rhyme adds a nice flow.. uber cute poem _
| Little girl Big world 11/19/09 . chapter 1
I love the rhyme scheme on this. I wish I could rhyme like you and make it all still flow and not sound forced. True talent :)
I like the lines, "most will never notice me
those who do will leave a mark"
Very honest and full of emotion.
Wonderful writing :)
| letyoursoultakeflight 11/16/09 . chapter 1
Your words are so pretty! I know this is sad and all, but your way of describing it cant help but make me smile :) Don't get me wrong though, it definitely conveys the sadness!
| tonight we bloom 11/15/09 . chapter 1
great rhythm and emotion, like in all of your poems. wonderful. i would love your opinions on my newest poem(s)!
ps i love your new penname, november is my absolute favorite month!