tragic and full of angst. love it

the rhyme adds a nice flow.. uber cute poem _

I love the rhyme scheme on this. I wish I could rhyme like you and make it all still flow and not sound forced. True talent :)

I like the lines, "most will never notice me

those who do will leave a mark"

Very honest and full of emotion.

Wonderful writing :)

Your words are so pretty! I know this is sad and all, but your way of describing it cant help but make me smile :) Don't get me wrong though, it definitely conveys the sadness!

great rhythm and emotion, like in all of your poems. wonderful. i would love your opinions on my newest poem(s)!

ps i love your new penname, november is my absolute favorite month!