Chapter 7 is half done, my ass.

This story is too good not to update. :c

Also, the chapter was kind of hard to follow because of the nonexistent story breaks.

interesting :) how old is Jo's 'girlfriend' (the senior)

Noticed you haven't updated lately, but concerning your question of changing the rating: if you mean because of the mention of Jo's sex life in this chapter, I wouldn't sweat it, I've seen far crazier stuff in T. If you mean because of something in a later chapter- well, I'll keep reading sometime soon. :-)

The "Normal" POV is "third person." Otherwise, nice- very cute! I like the subtle yet clear way that you presented Jo's sexual orientation.

Short and sweet intro. :-) I like the teasing dynamic between Mikaela and Jo- very realistic- and laughed aloud at "Because Jo Connor was just that damn tall." Was not expecting Jo to masquerade as a guy but that is a cool twist.

One suggestion- I've noticed a few points in your dialogue where you had a paragraph break, then continued to have the same character talking. Example:

"Jo," I gnawed at my bottom lip.

"Please…?"

Usually a paragraph break in dialogue suggests another speaker. It would be clearer that it's still Mikaela talking if you kept it all on one line, like:

"Jo," I gnawed at my bottom lip. "Please…?"

Very nice start. Favoriting! :-)

You know I really was enjoying this story and saved on my laptop,so I could check if you updated!Now Im feeling like it a wast of time and that you really won't have time to Finish let us know whats going to happen with this fic.

UPDATE!OR LET US KNOW IF YOU JUST DON'T WANT TO...PLEASE...PRETTY PLEASE

Something's not right with the format of this story. :P Love it, please continue :D

Please update! I absolutely lOve this story!

This story is awesome.

You're my favorite author on this site.

Updateeeee.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAS_UPDATE!

Great as always.

Nice story you've got going on here. I look forward to seeing how everything works out.

This is a happy moment, an update!yay

Formats a bit distracting but at least its out.

Now since you mentioned the other chapter...

Ill be waiting. Dont keep me to long.

Awesome work as always.

-Darkshadow

Pfft, well I suppose I can forgive you. Need to fix the format on this chapter, and I actually haven't read it yet, too tired, but I definitely will give it a read later. At any rate, glad to see you're still alive and kicking.