|Reviews for Operation Don't Fall for My Best Friend|
| sarcasmisourgreatestvirtue 4/28/13 . chapter 6
Chapter 7 is half done, my ass.
This story is too good not to update. :c
Also, the chapter was kind of hard to follow because of the nonexistent story breaks.
| Guest 2/20/13 . chapter 3
interesting :) how old is Jo's 'girlfriend' (the senior)
| CatalynMJ88 11/12/12 . chapter 3
Noticed you haven't updated lately, but concerning your question of changing the rating: if you mean because of the mention of Jo's sex life in this chapter, I wouldn't sweat it, I've seen far crazier stuff in T. If you mean because of something in a later chapter- well, I'll keep reading sometime soon. :-)
| CatalynMJ88 11/12/12 . chapter 2
The "Normal" POV is "third person." Otherwise, nice- very cute! I like the subtle yet clear way that you presented Jo's sexual orientation.
| CatalynMJ88 11/12/12 . chapter 1
Short and sweet intro. :-) I like the teasing dynamic between Mikaela and Jo- very realistic- and laughed aloud at "Because Jo Connor was just that damn tall." Was not expecting Jo to masquerade as a guy but that is a cool twist.
One suggestion- I've noticed a few points in your dialogue where you had a paragraph break, then continued to have the same character talking. Example:
"Jo," I gnawed at my bottom lip.
Usually a paragraph break in dialogue suggests another speaker. It would be clearer that it's still Mikaela talking if you kept it all on one line, like:
"Jo," I gnawed at my bottom lip. "Please…?"
Very nice start. Favoriting! :-)
| Guest 10/26/12 . chapter 6
You know I really was enjoying this story and saved on my laptop,so I could check if you updated!Now Im feeling like it a wast of time and that you really won't have time to Finish let us know whats going to happen with this fic.
| Guest 9/11/12 . chapter 6
UPDATE!OR LET US KNOW IF YOU JUST DON'T WANT TO...PLEASE...PRETTY PLEASE
| breakthehabit 8/23/12 . chapter 5
Something's not right with the format of this story. :P Love it, please continue :D
| Guest 7/8/12 . chapter 6
Please update! I absolutely lOve this story!
| Slayground 5/28/12 . chapter 1
This story is awesome.
You're my favorite author on this site.
| Kade 5/24/12 . chapter 6
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAS_UPDATE!
| Jack Rabbit the Poet 5/22/12 . chapter 6
Great as always.
| elfinbunion 4/22/12 . chapter 6
Nice story you've got going on here. I look forward to seeing how everything works out.
| DarkShadow2012 3/17/12 . chapter 6
This is a happy moment, an update!yay
Formats a bit distracting but at least its out.
Now since you mentioned the other chapter...
Ill be waiting. Dont keep me to long.
Awesome work as always.
| Blair Phoenix 3/14/12 . chapter 6
Pfft, well I suppose I can forgive you. Need to fix the format on this chapter, and I actually haven't read it yet, too tired, but I definitely will give it a read later. At any rate, glad to see you're still alive and kicking.