|Reviews for Chicago|
| Faithless Juliet 1/2/10 . chapter 1
This was really nice - it felt a bit short to me though.
Great use of Sinatra and sizzle, the two fit together so isomorphicly.
| no.peace.los.angeles 12/9/09 . chapter 1
Very nice. It "feels" like Chicago. I love the idea of the music
"sizzling" and having a specific color. I see it as a hot pink, but a muted hot pink, if that makes sense. The color that would be on a neon sign. Love it. Keep writing! :)
| Isca 11/22/09 . chapter 1
"Pancake griddle streets." I really like this description - it's sweet. ;)
"This town has the shakes." Hah. Good line. :)