This was really nice - it felt a bit short to me though.

Great use of Sinatra and sizzle, the two fit together so isomorphicly.

Juliet.

Very nice. It "feels" like Chicago. I love the idea of the music

"sizzling" and having a specific color. I see it as a hot pink, but a muted hot pink, if that makes sense. The color that would be on a neon sign. Love it. Keep writing! :)

"Pancake griddle streets." I really like this description - it's sweet. ;)

"This town has the shakes." Hah. Good line. :)