A.W.E.S.O.M.E! update soon perty please!

crap. romance gone. well, hopefully not. hope 'ya fix 'em.

This sounds like a really great group of friends, and I love Eddie and her together.

HI! :D How are you? Hope you're good. I read this and I think it's pretty interesting. You have a really big imagination to come up with all of that by yourself.

One bit of advice: You're supposed to start a new paragraph every time someone talks. It gets less confusing and helps tell who's speaking.

BYE!

Hearts, Sarah!

Woah! I was...actually really confused at the beginning with all the weird things happening to her. Then I finally sorta understood. I have no idea what she is but she is most definitely not a human. That I'm sure. Aww...Eddie and Chantelle! Nice! Can't wait to read more. Hope you update soon.

* Amanda *

Thanks hunnie! Ilysm sis! D

It is fantastic! Freaking love it. Sexy and seducing ;)

Thanks so much Raul :)

Great story! I absolutely love the use of words. its addictive and keeps drawing you back for more! : )

*silence*

*shock*

OH MY GOSH!

WOAH!

Chantelle did that to Eddie?

Wow, Chantelle is no longer human?

Chantelle is becoming a SYREN?

Great chapter!

You weren't kidding when you said this chapter was gonna be long...

It was long...and AWESOME!

Brilliant work.

Can't wait to read more when it comes out...

Hope you update soon!

* asn *

Oh! Paige and Eddie were never together. And Eddie is charming Chantelle...Ooh! And she fell asleep. That was a little odd. But other than that, everything else what fantastic. Amazing story. Hope you update soon!

* asn *

Ooh! Nice chapter. I really like Eddie. He's so sweet and understanding. But I'm getting a really weird vibe from him. Like he has some hidden motive. ANYWAY, other than that, brilliant chapter. Hope you update soon! I can't wait for more Chantelle drama and other stuff to happen. Great story!

* asn *

Ooh! Drama alert! Poor Chantelle. Good for nothing Freddy. Evil Dru! I'm watching you. That's was really absolutely freaking amazing. I loved it. Hope you update soon.

* asn *

Woah! This story is amazing. It has so much detail and full of the wondrous of imagination. Hope you update it soon. And cool! I'm the first reviewer. Yay me!