I like that unlike other vampire stories I have read yours ends with the vamp becoming human but it's the fourth finger of the left hand - not the third, unless you mean for her to be subtly flipping everyone off ;)

Interesting plotline!

Good try!

I kinda hate vampy stories but just decided to give this a shot...

Still not my type, but I like the way you write. )

You could just try deleting all ur chapters except for one and posting them up one by one instead. Some ppl look at the chapter:review ratio before the summary

So sort of update it once a week or sumtin even if ur done

It's a trick hunny. Hope you get better reviews than these soon enough 3 3