Interesting logic...I thought the whole percentage take a new look at it. Nice work.

I totally agree.

One requirement of Passionate LOVE is suffering.

It's when you love someone so much that it hurts.

it's always like 99.9% hurt,

it's aways like 1% joy left

das trifft leider den Nagel auf den Kopf!

"love gets a price,"... has a price

"Love can't be so a bad guy,".. such a bad guy

You have 99.9% and 1%. That's not 100%. You either need 99.9% and .1% or 99% and 1%.

The piece is interesting. It's cynical, but also hopeful.

Check otu the Review mArathon (link in my profile)

This was very nicely written, I loved how it ended.

Aww wow, interesting message here. There are a few typos but overall great piece dear! Keep writing!

Anna _

:) I love the total submission and unregretting tone.

Its okay