Wow, like I said, this is pretty good. I was a little confused at some parts, like who was speaking, but I figured it out pretty quickly.

Update soon! :)

Yours,

Funniefriend

Hey, this is great! I like Minerva's character, and her shadow power is good too. Can't wait to see where it goes!

Yours,

Funniefriend [

this is pretty good...but it's too much like harry potter/twilight. you should be more creative. Make up completely new ideas...ideas fresh from your own imagination. Then you'll have a great book that might get famous one day. Who knows? anything's possible with a little creativity. Hope this advice helped. keep writing, girl! :)