"But you already did. Thirteen years ago…" She moved into him, held her hands around the back of his neck and grazed her lips down on his, and whispered achingly, "And I said yes…"

Flipping Heck that was CUTE!

man I loved your story, So sad that it ended (

iam )

I love it already! :D So excited to read the rest!

the ending was so sweet! i loved it!

congratulations and thank you so much for completing this story!) i truly enjoyed reading it. good luck with your next project!)

nice story and i love it.. I'm glad it was end at last hehe

Wonderful end! I love how it ended with something about poker! So fitting! So she did end up getting the Joker and won. This chapter made me...elated, I should say. I was giddy while I was reading the last part. It truly was worth reading and I'm glad I stuck with it, even though I'm not so good with reading tragedy and things of that like.

Fabulous job D

Awwwh, yaaay !

The truth is FINALLY out, and they FINALLY lived happily ever after. (:

Well, I think Fiona redeemed herself a little in this chapter. I can't say I hate her anymore (but I can't say I like her either xD).

Anyways... this story was fantastic. It was really sweet, and super duper interesting. You did an amazing job writing it! :D

I've got one word for you: WHAAAAT? D:

That is all. (:

aw loved it! and they finally get married! :') so cute! definitely one of my favorite stories! :D

I enjoyed this story so much that I can't bring myself to stop reading until I get to the end! However, I wish it didn't end so... Sudden? Either way, I love it!

Oh no, no, no! Stupid Mike! Chase Carolyn. Ugh, Fiona was fine with me earlier of the story. But now, she's starting to annoy me. Ugh, Mike, why are you so frustrating?

Please update soon? I can't handle this drama and wondering what'll happen next! :P

Aahhh! Awwwww!

I cant believe its finished! The ending was perfect, though if you did some random one-shots, i dont know, with them both going to visit her mum again or something, that would be great!

This story has just been perfect from beginning to end, and im sure you should have no difficulty in publishing it. one thing though, did Michael forgive Fiona? It sounds like he wasnt blaming her to begin with, so I guess so.

It would have been cute to hear Michaels thoughts when he sees Carolyn come down the aisle, but it was a great ending.

Thankyou for a brilliant, emotion-wrenching story.

Wow, I can't believe its ended.

I'm glad Lyn and Michael got their happy ending, you had me worried for a bit. I still dislike Fiona though and thought you did an excellent job of writing her. She is shallow, spoilt and completely selfish. This is reiterated by the fact that instead of facing up to what she's done she attempts to commit suicide instead.

However, she minutely redeems herself by writing to Michael in the end.

I can't wait to read your next story.

Oh my gosh! Squee! Just been reading this into the wee hours or the morning.

Wow, so heartwrenching. I myself however adore the angst that comes from guilt , etc in these stories and perhaps there were some moments that could have been expanded on. But jut personally cos I absolutely love those moments.

I really felt for the relationship between Carolyn and her mum. So sad. Would have liked a soppy last bit there just for happy endings sake, but I guess it just puts into perspective that sometimes not everything can end happily. However I mainly felt terrible for her when she felt her mum loved Michael more ( though he's amazing) . I know what that feels like and I really felt for her. Some possible baggage in that area... Then again Carolyn is so kind she's probably just quite grateful, etc.

It's a dilemma you see because I wish that the ending had been done less quickly, however extremely glad it finished with these chapters because I hate waiting for updates. I think that in comparison to what events happened in a certain stretch of time, and to how less events happened in a longer stretch or time. Then the very quick ending. But I don't know what to think. I love it when a story is completely finished for you to read and I didn't know this was finished.

Anyway - it's great :) Thankyou for writing a great read

Oh my gosh! Squee! Just been reading this into the wee hours or the morning.

Wow, so heartwrenching. I myself however adore the angst that comes from guilt , etc in these stories and perhaps there were some moments that could have been expanded on. But jut personally cos I absolutely love those moments.

I really felt for the relationship between Carolyn and her mum. So sad. Would have liked a soppy last bit there just for happy endings sake, but I guess it just puts into perspective that sometimes not everything can end happily. However I mainly felt terrible for her when she felt her mum loved Michael more ( though he's amazing) . I know what that feels like and I really felt for her. Some possible baggage in that area... Then again Carolyn is so kind she's probably just quite grateful, etc.

It's a dilemma you see because I wish that the ending had been done less quickly, however extremely glad it finished with these chapters because I hate waiting for updates. I think that in comparison to what events happened in a certain stretch of time, and to how less events happened in a longer stretch or time. Then the very quick ending. But I don't know what to think. I love it when a story is completely finished for you to read and I didn't know this was finished.

Anyway - it's great :) Thankyou for writing a great read

So sad that it's over but extremely happy that they are happy together! You wrote a wonderful story...it was a great rollercoaster ride :)