DUUDE! Are you ever going to update this? Like, darn. WRITE!

(: Please...?

Okay so ...this story is amaxingly good! And your not updating it...why? Hahaha; ). Please please update this story.

Oh, and idk if you noticed that there was a sentance that said [remove so], im guessing your (talented) beta put in but was never corrected. Idk. Lol

interesting :)

this is a great story so far!

im really excited to see what happens next:D

update soon!

Aw. That's so sweet of you...

My most recent story is "Wicked", you can review it xDD

I love your story! Please update soon xD

cool i like it!

Why do I feel like Lily's birthday is going to go much farther than a cupcake? I can't wait to see what Max has to do with it, too. Update soon!

P.S 'Martha wasn't born a bitch' That kept me laughing for ages!

God's a showoff you know. he made you and had you have all that talent of yours! ;D

I LURVE IT MORE THAN THIS IS A CLICHE!

Cool plot, I see. You managed to bring the readers inside Lillian's emotions and I can actually feel the pain even though I hadn't experienced it. Keep it up. There are just a few typos, though, be sure to hunt for it.

In my opinion, you 'brutally maimed' Lillian. Poor girl. But it is the part of the conflict so I can't complain about it. I also think that, by the way she was described in the last few paragraphs in the story, she was some sort of an emo, don't you think?

But still, bring justice to her as the story progresses, I'll appreciate it. :)

Wow! I'm not sure where to start. I want to call social services on this family. I want to lock Martha the bitch in a room, sedate her, shave her head, and just plain make her ugly enough to match her personality. I want to pour a load of coffee in to their dad and make him watch what's happening in his house.

I want to know more, why did Mom die? Was Martha always this way or is it more recent? I want someone to find out about the cutting and help.

One thing, a couple of times you used loose when it should have been lose. Also not sure why you used italics in the prologue, is that just to set it apart from the rest?

Interested to see where this goes, what happens to this family.

This is really intriguing the way you wtite intices the reader and makes them want to read more, you have a way with words. Looking forwad to see where you take this.

in addition would you mind r and r my story?

Wow, it's stories like this that make me thankful I am an only child. The writing is wonderful. I can't wait to continue reading.

I really like this story. The way it's written, I can feel everything that Lillian is going through. I like the fact that her best friend is the complete opposite of her. I can't wait to see where this story is going.

I'm glad that she at least has one friend who cares for her. It's a sheame that some people in the world will never know what it is liked to be loved, and I thought she might have been one of them! Update soon!