|Reviews for The Weight Of The Worlds|
| sparkleglitz01 2/16/10 . chapter 17
Sweet two chapters; things start to get interesting...
I'm not liking that cliff hanger though!
I hope you can update soon :)
| sanitary pad 2/6/10 . chapter 16
What's up with Darryn! :O
And Jaxin and jealousy issues..? Hahahah. Well, I can't wait to read more. Great job and looking forward to the next update!
| sparkleglitz01 2/3/10 . chapter 16
Aww, Jaxin was jealous ;)
Things are starting to get interesting, I can see some twists coming up possibly. Good work, keep it up!
| sanitary pad 1/29/10 . chapter 15
HHAHAHA, poor Kiri. I'm still a little suspicious of Darryn though.. Oh well. Great chapters, update soon! :)
| sparkleglitz01 1/28/10 . chapter 14
WOW, awesome chapters!
Jaxin and Kiri huh? I hope it works out for them... :)
Darryn seems mysteriously interesting as well; I can't wait to read more on his character. Also, I think someone's jealous ;)
Keep up the great writing!
| alexa35 1/23/10 . chapter 11
Yay! They got the gem! :D
| sparkleglitz01 1/12/10 . chapter 10
YAY, I'm glad you're posting 2 chapters at a time :)
I "LOL-ed" at the Lord of the Ring references
So, the gem has been found... but I have a feeling it isn't going to be so easy...
Bring on Part 2 :)
| Rhie 1/11/10 . chapter 11
I think That you ned to post the rest.
| Rhie 1/2/10 . chapter 9
Hey You kind of know me... I'm Chasing Ideas Friend from the Fair... Good story "hint hint"
| sparkleglitz01 1/2/10 . chapter 9
Oh, two chapters! Thank you :)
Hm, I really want to know what Jaxin's problem is...
The cave should be interesting as well-
| sanitary pad 12/30/09 . chapter 9
And to think I thought we would find out what's up with Jaxin in this chapter! And now I'm more confused and bewildered.. hahaha. Well, good job so far, and update soon, kay? :D I really want to find out what's going to happen in the cave..
| sanitary pad 12/30/09 . chapter 8
Cool chapter. Those two granddads must be pretty tight, to have their grandchildren be friends, huh? Hahaha. Well, I'm looking forward to Kiri's conversation with Jaxin - this little mystery is seriously bugging me!
| sanitary pad 12/30/09 . chapter 7
Hahahha the dragon part was way cool! And, I think I'm starting to get an idea of why Jaxin's being such a complete moron. heh.
| sanitary pad 12/30/09 . chapter 6
Time for me to catch up on the story :)
Well, what's up with Prince Jaxin? (Btw I like his name. It's pretty cool. Jaxin. Jax-in. Hahahahahha) Confidence issues? Ah well, I guess I'll find out in the next few chapters or so :) But anyway, good chapter, and the quest begins! Hoho
| sparkleglitz01 12/18/09 . chapter 7
I liked the method of transport ;)
I am also intrigued by Jaxsin...
Keep writing :DD