OMG! This is so good! :)

I really can't wait to read more!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!

WOW! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

OMG!

It's so exciting!

:) :) :) :) :)

Very good. I'm intrigued. :)

I'm curious about this Great Disaster.

Anyway, I really liked the chapter.

Oh!

Wow!

Again, no mistakes.

Wow! I really loveses!

Oh, and I didn't notice any mistakes at all in that chapter. Just thought I ought to let you know...

Anyway. Guess what I'm gonna do now!

Okay, finished dinner now.

All I can say is:

OMG! Wow! I loveses!

Well, no actually, that's not all I can say.

1) At the start, you put: 'It was QUITE and isolated...'. Did you mean quiet?

2) Twice, I think you left the 'y' off the end of 'they'. Unless it was meant to say 'the', and I'm getting confused. 'THE envied our ability' and 'It was at our peak that THE struck'.

3) At one point, you forgot about past tense! 'The pack rejoice...'.

Okay, I'm done saying what I want to say now. Reading more momentarily! :)

I'm tempted to not review this chapter, and just read the next one straight away... but I'm not gonna do that.

There were exactly two tiny little mistakes:

1) Were you supposed to put 'made HIS dreary and nostalgic.'? It makes no sense. Did you mean to put HIM?

2)You put 'where' instead of 'were' in the following sentence, 'how where the people supposed to remember their history?'

Sorry for being slightly picky. It was still really good. Can't read next chapter, dinnertime. :)

Ooh... :)

Interesting chapter...

Can I ask what a prypiat is?

I loveses! It's really getting interesting, now! :)

I'm not too happy about the mention of a rat in an insult, but then again, a rat probably would cower in the shadows... Or, at least, a domestic rat would... Well, Roxi would... And Squeaky would have...

Oh! I really really likeses! :) :)

OMG! WOW!

I really likeses!

:)

I'm really intrigued... :)

Oh...0.0...Update...

This is an awesome story! I LOVE WOLVES!