Mmhm.

That was beautiful. It was amazing how it transformed, and their seemed to be these statements of facts, that then evolved into this piece of emotional attachment.

"For dramatics, let's call it a

Deep,

Dark,

Chasm of despair."

You sound like one of my friends with that line ;)

So yes. I LOVED it!

Brilliant!

interesting, unique writing. and very truthful. you delve deep.