This was an awesome poem! I like the last line and I like the way you make it seem that he is in love with pain/suffering and not just feeding off of it.

Truely disturbing. Normally not a fan of poetry, but I really liked this one. You have the gift of words, keep writing.
**Slave**

I typically dislike poetry and horror, but... I recognize good work... this is it. Great job.

Mmm...good. :)

Wow! that was intence! better writter then i am and that's sad b/c i specialize in poetry!~it's a thought for me to think as to where this is all comming from~>but then i stop and think: from a girl like you, who's best friend is a epidemic like me.
~QueenOfHearts035~

that was good....very very good...

Increadable.. I am impressed