I love this! It's so eloquently written, yet simple and to-the point.

Maybe I'm just weird, but the last stanza gives an undertone of almost darkness, I love that.

The whole poem is lighthearted and fun yet not silly or to be taken lightly, there's an undertone of seriousness that I get when I read it.

All in all, very inspiring. It makes me want to go out and write.

Keep writing!

Lauren.