You really need to start submitting your poetry somewhere else. Somewhere where you can win money? Oh my gosh, this poem was absoutly amazing! Like, you should.

Anyway, back to this wonderful review I'm about to write. :) I had to read this a couple times, just to get the concept of this whole poem. Lol. Well my guess is probably wrong but here it goes. There is a guy. And he is tr ying to make his way through life. And he has to build the bridges he burnt to get to someone he loves? LOL its wrong. But i tried :)

Great poem! And I love the deepness of this one. :)