|Reviews for no more pillowbooks!|
| dreamer-13 11/3/11 . chapter 12
"Life"? What's that? Is that an MMORPG?
| dreamer-13 11/3/11 . chapter 8
I like fliptheswitch and tomorrow is cancelled...
Wow, I am really far behind... *shrug* that's what I get when I get bored and tired and start snooping for pillowbooks...
| dreamer-13 11/3/11 . chapter 6
Red is my favorite color...
*shouts* I STILL LOVE YOU, RED! :D
| metal butterfly 3/5/11 . chapter 25
i know a genuinely horrible person called zack. :) just thought you'd like to know that. he's blonde, wears a name brand gillet and he shouts at my boyfriend in the street.
| Minor Masterpiece 1/9/10 . chapter 6
Oh, the entire idea of this one (the color naming convention!) was pure genius! (: Very, unique, creative, and confusing, wonderful (:
There might be three errors in this one though:
after the brackets did you mean "shall we"?
when you were talking about "dirty pale off white skin of a boy..." did you mean covered in "stars"
and controlled has two "l"s
yet again, you did wonderful(:
-exoh of The Review Marathon, there's a link in my profile
| Minor Masterpiece 1/9/10 . chapter 4
This one (sex lists) was very interesting. The beginning was very abstract and colorful, which I liked. And I love lists in poems and stories so I really enjoyed the entire list motif. There might (because yet again, I don't know if you PREFER it that way) another spelling error in the word I'd you added an 'e' but I'm not sure.(:
So, this was amazing, this entire thing is amazing, keep it up(:
-exoh, of The Review Marathon, there would be a link to that in my profile.
| Minor Masterpiece 1/9/10 . chapter 2
I love the pillowbook and the entire idea of the first story because- you format like I LOVE. The only thing you might want to check is in the first poem (we are all made of stardust!) I think you mistyped "listien" easy fix (: (and if you didn't mistype it, than cool idea of making up your own spelling!)
I'm gonna go read more, I really like this.
-exoh, of the Review Marathon, there would be a link to that in my profile(:
| Little girl Big world 12/17/09 . chapter 34
your welcome for coming. It was enjoyable to read.
Thank you for writing it :)
| Little girl Big world 12/17/09 . chapter 33
Glad you are feeling better on 10 dollar antibiotics.
Hope you find your journal so you can find your pen :)
| i collect lullabies 12/16/09 . chapter 34
well, even if i haven't reviewed (i started reading this only a few days ago and pretty much read every chapter in a few days), i enjoyed your pillowbook. (:
| for shame 12/16/09 . chapter 33
i have a strange attachment to stationery.
when i set shit down in my girlfriend's house, it always ends up under her bed.
i have no clue how.
| for shame 12/12/09 . chapter 27
i don't like eating pumpkin pie.
not the american kind, anyway.
the chinese version is so much
better. but i am asian, so that
may be the bias talking. hmm.
| for shame 12/12/09 . chapter 31
it's cold in california?
madness. southern california
must be toasty right now -
or at least toasty compared to
the hell's balls that is going
on outside of my house today.
| for shame 12/12/09 . chapter 30
i don't know anyone who only smoked pot once.
there is something poetic about sharing air, sharing particles.
but nothing poetic when you begin sneezing into their face.
that just gets awkward.
| Little girl Big world 12/11/09 . chapter 32
I hate being sick :/
Feel better. & I'm a day late but goodnight!