This poem is breathtaking. The imagery and figurative language is very effective and I could almost understand the feeling. :)

I think I like this one better than the first one. This one is very effective and it's beautiful. :)

I really love the imagery in this poem. Also, the descriptions are very wonderful. The rhyme scheme is neat, too. :)

Hey,

Wooah. :/ That was pretty scary, the descriptions were so accurate that we felt as if all that stuff was happening to US. Really great use of words, it was awesomme :)

ranDUMM

Hey,

This is such a great new year's fic, well done! It was beautifully written and the imagery was gorgeous. BTW, you won The Lounge 'Challenge Fic Of The Year' award, so well done! :D:D

ranDUMM

Aww wow, I really, really love this! Your use of the rhyming and descriptive words was brilliant ). Favvs listt!

Hey,

For such a good poem, it should get a thousand reviews. That is absolutely BRILLIANT, and I have to say, honestly, probably one of my favourites on this site so far. It has such beautiful messages, and the imagery is excellent, wonderful emotional depth. I absolutely LOVE this :) KEEP WRITING!

ranDUMM

Hello! A very good poem, sad and descriptive words create vivid images in my mind. I found it very powerful poem of loneliness.

AA