|Reviews for Something Else|
| Sercus Kaynine 1/8/10 . chapter 7
I love the story this piece tells. It's not something you see a lot on FP and I think you pulled it off well. The last stanza was chilling but beautiful.
Good job and good luck in WCC!
| deefective 1/7/10 . chapter 7
Lovely. I really liked how you wrote this. It had a soft, jilting melody to it that fit perfectly and I liked the abrupt flow as well. Also, that ending was fantastic. I can feel all the subtle melancholy behind it. Nicely done.
| YasuRan 12/15/09 . chapter 6
I actually quite liked this since I do have a partialness to abstract images and metaphors. It's a nice way to lead the reader into interpreting what the words mean. Good job!
| YasuRan 12/12/09 . chapter 5
Sweet work! I think the transition between the last paragraph and the line before it was a bit choppy but whatever, that's just my opinion. Otherwise, keep it up!