This is cute... and so true. Butterflies is a *very* technical term... much more effective at describing the feeling than anything the brain can come up with. :)

I love butterflies, so had to check it out. A very clever poem. I've often wondered what that feeling really is. Good job. :)

me too :)

lovely. clever.

the short lines and repetition of "or" move it on/ keep it jumping like butterflies.