perfect.

the vulnerability of the beginning until the frustration of the ending, i loved it all.

-j.

this is amazing, something about it just touches and evokes my feelings i have tried to surpress and "get over" its amazing though. thank you.

when i read 'i sunk into you'...it reminded me of vampires.

haha. so random.

well, i love the fact that it creates such a vivid image in my mind.

Your poems have the wonderful tendency

to remind me what it was like to be

fully enraptured by love. I honestly

forget such times without these lovely

words to help guide me back to them.

"I sunk into you" really struck me-

it summarizes the piece wonderfully.

SO GOOD

love love love the concept of the bolded words

ahh this was beautifully constructed with imagery.