|Reviews for like puzzle pieces|
| we must reinvent love 1/2/10 . chapter 1
the vulnerability of the beginning until the frustration of the ending, i loved it all.
| unuttered.thoughts 12/2/09 . chapter 1
this is amazing, something about it just touches and evokes my feelings i have tried to surpress and "get over" its amazing though. thank you.
| bbyxbanaaana 11/27/09 . chapter 1
when i read 'i sunk into you'...it reminded me of vampires.
haha. so random.
well, i love the fact that it creates such a vivid image in my mind.
| drink me pretty 11/26/09 . chapter 1
Your poems have the wonderful tendency
to remind me what it was like to be
fully enraptured by love. I honestly
forget such times without these lovely
words to help guide me back to them.
"I sunk into you" really struck me-
it summarizes the piece wonderfully.
| colorful 11/26/09 . chapter 1
love love love the concept of the bolded words
ahh this was beautifully constructed with imagery.