This is one of my most favorite stories in Fictionpress. You're writing style really engages me to the story and your characters are interesting and unique without getting too silly in a bad way (though Jane is borderlining XD). The rated scene fits perfectly with your writing style. So I say yeh!

I'm eagerly waiting for your next chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!

Yes, it was sexy enough for the first chapter of their relationship, considering Grey and Rome just made up after a fight and all, and haven't been dating too long. Now, if they had been together for several months, then this would have been no where sexy enough... Everyone else is SUCH a cock block!

I'm not sure who loses in the river jumping scenario, but to my reckoning, that's as sexy as a sex scene needs to be. It did its job: it advanced the plot and deepened the portrait of the characters. Anybody who's reading primarily for pronographic purposes wouldn't have made it to chapter twelve, I think.

I loved this chapter. I thought it was so funny that October walked in on them and yes it was sexy enough!

loved it ,all I can say is finally! I thought I was going to have to kick some butt to get those two to talk to each was funny with his rules,I know he does not want to even think about those too together,he is so straight,rome was so right about that one.

ps tell your editer you do good ,the bj scene was very hot,but I also enjoyed the cuddle too.

Damn you.

xD

loved this chapter by the end ;D

update soon!

yay

Yay! I thought it was very hot for you first try! :)

Im so happy they finally got together! I really can't wait for the next chapter I love this story! :)

Awesome story, Grey is my favourite character because he's a cool dude, and english, and not bitchy(sarcasm is ok). I like Kenya too. I have heard that when people from the UK go to the US they don't like the tea because of the water out there, they have to drink coffee because it's stronger and covers the taste of the water... not sure if that is true.

This is a well written story and moves nice and slow. I liked how you went for grey not october, and I like how you have widened the amount of characters. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read what daft rome is gonna do next, will he make up with Grey? Will he stick his foot in it again? lol

Omg I love you. Please keep writing! This is written so well!

I am equally XD and D: at this at the same time. Thank god for emoticons because words cannot express how awesome this is. At then end of the chapter, I was like ":O what are you doing you fool! Kiss him some more! As a matter of fact, take him on the floor right now! DO IIITTT! :O" ...Ahem, anyway. It was a very good chapter. Good work. _

I'm really tired cuz it's two in the morning as I'm writing this but AHH finally! Seriously, finally Rome gets it! GOD now I have read next chapter. You're right, this is kinda cliffhangery. (My iPod didn't even try to correct cliffhangery...is that a legit word?). Anyway, it's gotten to the point where Grey is seriously one of my favorite characters of like...any story. I'm really enjoying him. In fact I'm just really enjoying this story in general. It's always a good day when I see the email alerting me you've updated.

Anyway as I said I'm tired so I can't think of much to say, but many lols were had whilst reading this. Many. And groans of oh-god-Rome-you-are-really-a-huge-idiot-fix-this.

Looking forward to more.

Hearts,

Maggie/AftG

loved it !Gray gets some balls.I was so happy with the kiss .Rome is so clueless ,I would have looked at Gray the whole time not October (Gray's more my type)but I guess Rome was still in the friend zone so I will cut him some just seems so sad all the time ,I really want to hear more of his just seemes interesting to me.A really wonderful ,I was just thinking about this story yesterday too and then you updated.

NOOOOOO! Don't raise the rating! Well, if it's just the next chapter, then I can read the chapters that follow, but if you do it more than once, then I'll have to stop reading this completely and that would make me SAAAAD because I LOOOOOVE this story! It's one of my favorites! Aw, man! Now I'm depressed...

The rating is raised the next chapter? Oh god, I can't wait! I'm so happy that Rome finally knows what's going on, this chapter was wonderful. Thank you!