|Reviews for the promise of virginia|
| Isca 1/28/10 . chapter 1
"Tonight I am going to let the cold air contour." I love the "cold air contour" alliteration here; it's stunning. The tone of this line is also very emotionally raw; good job!
"Will serve as my searchlight." Moving. Striking. Impactful.
| tonight we bloom 12/29/09 . chapter 1
this is amazing! i can really relate to this. beautiful imagery and great emotion, combined. i lovethe first and second stanzas.
i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work; it would mean a lot to me!
| for shame 12/2/09 . chapter 1
i don't think planes work quite well to describe a body, unless you are going for an angular, calculated, almost mathematical sort of girl.
but it's a lovely poem.
she's lucky to have this dedicated to her.
| cah-set 11/28/09 . chapter 1
I love you, Jessica Kelli Moore. This is beautiful, and again I realize how wonderful you really are.