"Tonight I am going to let the cold air contour." I love the "cold air contour" alliteration here; it's stunning. The tone of this line is also very emotionally raw; good job!

"Will serve as my searchlight." Moving. Striking. Impactful.

this is amazing! i can really relate to this. beautiful imagery and great emotion, combined. i lovethe first and second stanzas.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work; it would mean a lot to me!

i don't think planes work quite well to describe a body, unless you are going for an angular, calculated, almost mathematical sort of girl.

but it's a lovely poem.

she's lucky to have this dedicated to her.

I love you, Jessica Kelli Moore. This is beautiful, and again I realize how wonderful you really are.