Bravo! It's so touching.

Wow this is beautiful! :)

I remember feeling like this. :D

This is really stunning - beautiful even. I really liked the emotions you have conveyed here. I got the strong feeling of gratitude for a loved one is being shown in this poem. This really did impress me :D

cute!

beautiful :)

FRG

[Thanks for making me give the best of me,

even the worst days are bright to me] I like these lines. There are some great emotions there and it's also very relatable.

[between the left tears deep in our hearts.] I didn't understand this phrasing. Maybe "between the tears left deep in our hearts?"

Great poem. Simple, but encompassing a lot of emotions.

Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

This is amazing! Excellent job!

I liked the beginning of this (the italicized bit). Nice start! :]

between the left tears deep in our hearts ist wirklich genial

LG

Franziska

OMG..."Even the worst days are bright to me,"...that's how being with someone you care about should make everyone feel. I really loved that line!

Now that was a cute poem, I wish I could write a good love poem like that for a change lol.

Yeah..never had a boyfriend...

But this reminds me of when I was sick my dad would curl up with me :)

"Thanks for making me give the best of me,

even the worst days are bright to me"

That is my favorite part :)

Aww, very nice! An emotional piece for sure. How are you? I noticed that you haven't posted anything for a long time! Please post a new poem soon!

Anna _

Short, but good. Liked "thanks for making me give the best of me." Best gift someone can give sometimes.