|Reviews for to sarah|
| simpleplan13 1/10/10 . chapter 1
As always, nice work. I really like the beginning descriptions. it's really interesting the aspect of her looks that you focus on. I also like the alliteration in the third line, nice touch.
The only part I didn't get was the Oprah's couch. Was that meant literally? I didn't get why she'd be on her couch.
Anyway, nice job.
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