I just wanted to let you know that I am love with your narrative. I don't know what it is, maybe it's the snarky, sensibility of Noel or maybe just the nonchalant way he observes everything and everyone including himself and still seem so clueless. Whatever it is, keep doing it :p

o i like me you'll update soon? please!

Okay, you got me. I want to know what's up with this guy, and why his father doesn't want him to talk to anybody, and what kind of trouble he's in . . .

i actually like this :)

i hope you get the chance to update again