|Reviews for Six Word Story|
| FonzFan82 12/13/09 . chapter 1
First time I've read a story like this one. Try to make a story longer than 6 words!
| ChasingTrust27 12/3/09 . chapter 1
i thought it was poetic. i think i understand what your getting at.
| Wakao 12/1/09 . chapter 1
Hmm. I've heard of these six-word stories.
I'm not so sure about yours. Doesn't anyone fall alive? Unless you're dead and you're lowered into a ditch or something.
| G.M.Smith 12/1/09 . chapter 1
i like it, but it makes not sense at all. Usually i like anything and everything that has the word 'darkness' it, but you should continue this, i don't understand anything about this besides something about darkness, a guy falling, and i don't see how the word alive is conected to the two.
-really you should write more so that people will understand what this really is, and what its about.
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