Haha cute. I love it when the girl wears the pants in a relationship. ]

Aw he's adorabubble! So sleepy, so cute!

Really liked this, liked that Nora is the boss in this relationship...haha. Irony.

But I love this heaps so great job! It was funny and so cute it made me smile. Jealous guys are always so fun to read about and it was awesome how she kept coming and waking him up.

this was nice (:

Light and sweet...yep this fits that category. The humour worked too. ;)

cute and well written. )

This was cute! I didn't get too much insight into the characters, though, but since it was supposed to be a light and fluffy read, I'll let it slide ;) Nice job!

Aw I love it!

xx

Ali

Hello!

This reminds me of BJ's Diary. What with the playboy boss and the assistant, and their eventual hook up. I'd say you achieved your goal in that this was light and fluffy and sweet, but I am not entirely convinced that Dallas and Nora should, in fact, be together. Nora seems the controlling type, and surely it can't be easy to date your assistant.

Overall, a well-written piece. The dialogue flows naturally, and the scene where she barged into his bedroom twice is very original.

-W.