|Reviews for anbreana|
| tonight we bloom 12/21/09 . chapter 1
this is really really good
your word choice makes this a powerful piece that kind of just leaves you.. pondering
| i think that maybe 12/2/09 . chapter 1
i've been sitting here with this on the screen for the last few minutes.. it's.. powerful.
something about your word choice, the imagery, makes it flow in such an unique way. really, it's just like nothing i've seen before.
(and that last line? love.)
| Isca 12/2/09 . chapter 1
"The boy can't work with surgical gloves." That's a very powerful way to end the piece - tying together abortion with pedophilia and mathematics.