|Reviews for Loved The Most|
| Random-Idiocity 12/4/09 . chapter 1
''Standing still is the correct and roborant move'' I especially liked that but this whole piece is wonderful. Keep it Up!
| Punslinger 12/4/09 . chapter 1
Not exactly an uplifting pep talk for falling in love, but you give me pause to think. "Time flies by with her broken Wing..." I like that line, and "...your heartbroken shadow."
| wo bu ai ni le 12/4/09 . chapter 1
I like the balance of sentiments here. Some morbidity.. But seems loving enough :)
| nickyO 12/4/09 . chapter 1
Really good. Love the title, love the work, a sentiment I haven't seen expressed very often.
| Manuel Fajar 12/4/09 . chapter 1
Fall's lonely days
Drop into points
Filling no voids;
Making no lines
Where words would wince
To make heart's space;
Is time soul's mark
In second's felt
To mark life's pace?
p.s. OK,— it's winter here & it's not winter there, but that's life.
| Airlia Alala 12/3/09 . chapter 1
I like this poem as I found it thought provoking. I love the last two lines 'To make but I've had enough, Of your heartbroken shadow.' I think that they paint a good image for the reader. Good job!